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We sat on the dock with legs dangling over the edge. The water made a gentle sloshing sound along the shore. Crickets chirped and frogs croaked. We looked over the water, enjoying the bright, white reflection of the moon.  The moon was full tonight and it seemed so close. Millions of stars dotted the night sky.

James sat beside me, very quiet and still, as if any movement or sound he made would make the scene evaporate.  He had never been camping before. Living in the city, we don’t get to see the sky like this. The moon is the most visible thing, and maybe a few stars, but street lights block out so much of the light that’s present in the night sky. Here, in almost perfect darkness, it felt like I was seeing every star ever created. The deep blanket of darkness was covered with diamond-like…

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    • nikewrites
    • May 7th, 2014

    Awww! Thanks Wil!


    • Mary
    • May 14th, 2014

    I loved it and found it hilarious when you tried to talk like a little girl. I liked it but a problem you might run into is holding the listeners attention especially with a long story.


    • Thanks for the feedback :0. I actually planned to do split chapters up by scenes instead of just one long read for a chapter lol. Is there anything else that might be a problem?


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